Update

As I am taking February off to study and research I thought i would post an update on my studies.  I am reading a book on the darker characters of fiction. How to write them that is, in reading this book I have made the decision to make one of my protagonists a Dark Hero.  I am also considering investing in some graphing paper to better map out living and working areas. 

Changes

Thank you all for the comments, I have (I hope) improved according to your many suggestions and a few of my own ideas.